Who's that in the picture?

very deep.

emotional.

heartspoken.

talent,at its best.
i didnt expect to see this off some one on newgrounds.

if you have any other writing,
i wouldnt mind reading it.

...wow...
..tis really beautiful..
..ill guess the girl in thee pic is the girl that the poems about...
..just a guess...

I wish I had that talent for poems...
Anyway that reminds me lots of things...

Cheer up, Emo Kid. The world isn't against you, you have to realize, you're making it that way, and just face all that troubles you. Then, all will be well. . . . .This comes from someone who has faced this.

Don't take it as a curse. I think poetry is the greatest gift you can get.
It makes me get away from the human misery.

beautiful. do you write music?

He gets inspired to write poetry with dark elements within. That IS a curse.

Chicks...chicks are truly the source of your sorrow. I can't blame you, they were the source of my sorrow all throughout high school and if you're any way the same, it'll only get worse. You may get lucky, but then that's just it, you'll have to get lucky.

While you're rambling on about how this girl's physical attraction triggers chemicals in your brain that make your body feel all irritated (a drug that your body is obviously addicted to), let me tell you about the girl's curse. Especially in the beautiful ones, and this girl doesn't seem to be any exception, a woman's burden is that everyone is trying to get into their pants, one way or another. And with this comes a lot of attention, and this particular one looks like she's well aware of what I've just said and knows how to take advantage of it.

So what makes you so damn special that she'll want you over the hundreds of guys hitting on her? Maybe you've already asked yourself this, and this is why you've chosen such a lifestyle. (Either that or your dad wasn't able to give you enough attention) But such a lifestyle hurts you more than it helps you by making you look unique. Be unique, sure, but don't make yourself look unstable. The "Prince Charming on a White Horse" aspect has been beaten so severely into girls at a young age, with today's society, that it's a subconscious need of every girl: a man that can save them from whatever vexes them, whether through support or other means. Being unstable means that they can't rely on you as much as the next guy.

So what makes them interested? (Apart from being rich, famous, or having ridiculously good looks?) Guys that don't give a damn. That aren't out to get them in the sack or "obtain their hearts" (or at least know through experience how to SEEM that way). Those are the unique guys that stand a chance. Jocks that treat them like crap, but they somehow always go back to, assholes, jerks, etc. James Bond didn't give a damn, Gene Simmons didn't give a damn, Snoop Dawg didn't give a damn, "Frankly, Scarlet, I don't give a damn". It's a cold truth that women should be ashamed of. But gives a whole new truth to the term "be yourself". They are just other human beings, just like you, with different anatomy parts.

The fact that you are writing them poems and worshiping them just sends them the message "Hey, I can make this guy do WHATEVER I want". And though that may seem like it should be a pretty attractive message to send, it makes you predictable, and the definition of "uninteresting" is "predictable". That and any relationship that works based on one doing whatever the other wants isn't a relationship at all, it's slavery.

So stop thinking with your dick. I know it's hard (HAH PUN!) and I know you want to tell yourself it's something other than sexual attraction, but hardly any relationship isn't. Just growing dependence on what you're spouse can provide. (I'm a very logical guy, it's rather depressing at times. Donnie Darko is the closest example I've seen to "true" love: unconditional) Anyways, do that, be your true self, and I think you'll be well on your way to feeling more comfortable with yourself.

It's true when they say that poetry is the key to a girl's heart, so don't toss this ability, you just needed to of had access to her heart already for it to have any effect. You've got talent, though immature, so keep writing. You're choosing to destroy rather than to create (the only true "good and evil"'s in life) so I can't feel pity for you.

-Flecko-

your a pussy